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Poem written for class...

See the flowers in the snow


See the person in someone you don't know


See the endless road, stretched a mile


See the good in a bright morning smile


See the warmth in a kiss Hello


See the nice of a jailed in fellow


See the song of a silent being


See the art of a sightless seeing


See the whispers in a crowd of noise


See the angel in those devilish boys


See the girl behind the mask


See the anger of a shattered past


See the music in an earless friend


See the happiness a single person sends


See the rose in a field of weeds


See the hunger that love can feed.


See the peace at the end of a war


See that selfish humans may become more


See the light in a room engulfed in black


See the sadness that final goodbye brings back

©2008-2009 ~Alyssagal
:iconalyssagal:

Author's Comments

A poem that I made for class.
Some parts were kind of inspired by myself. How come kid's can judge me before they know me. You might be able to pick those parts out.

As you can tell, I'm not a very talented writer, and I have to admit. But please do not judge my poem on the lack of...more descriptive words? Hnn....but anyways, my vacublary hasn't increased alot let, so please leave me be about that. Thanks.

If you see any spelling errors please tell me. I would not purposly put spelling errors, so don't call me stupid and say. "You don't know how to spell!" Because I have already said. Also, I would prefere you used Constructive Critism. I will not accept, "This sucks! You can't write to save your life! God! Stop attempting to write!!!" Thats just rude (and I will probably find a way to make you pay...hnn). I WILL accept stuff like, "Omigawd this is awsome imma fav it!" Or, "You're so awsome!!! This is the best!!! :worship:" But it will not be as greatly apreciated as some flat out constructive crisitm. Thankyou.

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I love this poem! Its so amazing, and beautiful! Your a really good writer (and drawer :P)

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A good friend will bail you out of jail

While a best friend will be right beside you goin' "Wow we fucked up."
:iconalyssagal:
Thank you :D And Thank you :D And Thank you!!! Thank you for all the favourites, comments, and the watch C: Means a lot, you seem to like my work and that makes me really happy :D

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:analprobestare: :heart: You know you want it. :heart: :analprobe:

Thankyou *sensia101 for fixing my icon!!! :heart:

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